Win by saving your money

Win by saving
your money

thats the head slogan on pooltogether .com: i would suggest to improve it!!!

the user is not really saving … money !
better _store it , for a chance to win
giving unused coins a chance to win in a fair (game)
((where he can only win))
my point is … the user is not really " saving " his money
help me here anyone …english is not my native !

maybe it is perfect , but what do you think …

TRANSfER YOUR COINS TO P.T. AND GET A FAIR CHANCE TO WIN
its not as short but thats my pick…

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